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As many of you know, I love my husband, Mr. brickhouse who I often refer to on my blog, as Mr. B.
But, there is another talented and charming Mr. B out there in the world better known as Mark Bialczak, who tagged me in a poetry challenge titled, Love in Ten Lines. You can check out this Mr. B’s lovely poem here.
Well, I am always up for a love challenge and it so happens that I awoke today feeling rather feisty and edgy. So I agreed to participate.
I had to tone it down a bit because it was getting hot around here and I didn’t need another hot flash.
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Here are the rules:
•Write about love using only 10 lines.
•Use the word love in every line.
•Each line can only be four words long.
•Nominate others who are up for the challenge.
•Let them know about the challenge.
•Title the post: Love in Ten Lines
•Include a quote about love (this can be your own).
•You may write in any language.
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My Poem:
“Love In Ten Lines”
Take me, mi amor,
Love me at once.
Lust, passion with love,
Is love I demand.
Caress me, mi amor,
With love and desire.
Kiss me, mi amor,
Love-making with fire.
Love me, mi amor,
For I love you.
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My quote:
“Con amor, se puede”
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*I am going to break the rules (because I am stubborn and a trouble maker) and not nominate anyone in particular. I urge you however, to give it a try on the comment section, if you so desire. RRRRrrrrrrrrrrr!
I am digging your poem! Great job. I want to try this but am afraid I might fail horribly at it! And I can’t top your Amor skills!
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Gracias, Papa! I can’t imagine you would fail at this. Give it a try, it’s a good challenge and…RRRRRrrrrrrrr! 🙂
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Ahhhh the passion.
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Nice poem—you did a great job! I’d try to write one myself but I’m too distracted by the bag of Dove chocolates sitting on my desk. Maybe I should write something like, “Ode to chocolate”??
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It was fun to do and my hubby didn’t mind. A chocolate poem would be orgasmic!! 🙂
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OOOoo. Between your poetry and those photos, things are getting steamy. Will you repeat in Spanish?
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There seems to be a demand for a steamy love poem in Spanish. I must work on that. 🙂
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I hope you sent this to Mr B, because he probably skipped whatever meeting he had to rush right home to you. 🙂
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I don’t know about that, Andra. He’s had a meeting every night this week! AY!
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Nice, I’ve seen several of these now!
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Interesting. 10 lines you say? Well, so far today I’ve been challenged to write a story in one sentence, so why not a poem in 10 lines? Is there something about April that puts bloggers into the mood to assign homework? Did I miss the memo? 😉
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Ha,ha,ha! A story in one sentence? WHOA, that’s a tough one. I didn’t get the memo either Ally, just the challenge. It was fun to do. 🙂
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Hot, hot hot! You are one sexy poet mi amiga, phew 😀
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Ha, Sherri! I may be all talk… 🙂
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Haha 😀 Well…it never hurt to have some sexy mystery 😉
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I love this!! I want to try one! Let me think first…
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Okay. Think hot! LOL. 🙂
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I can’t do this… but I love yours…
love it
love it
love it
love it
love it
love it
love it
love it
love it
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I don’t believe that Arturo could not complete this challenge. You are one clever hombre! Glad you, love it. 🙂
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I am just too busy for love right now… sniff… ha!
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Great feisty poem, Maria! I’d love to read this entirely in Spanish 😉
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Si, amor en Espanol es muy caliente. 🙂
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My cold shower just now felt … Anyway, Mrs. B, yes, your bilingual Ten-Line Poem coaxed the worm out of the tequilla bottle of amor. Feisty, uh-huh. Lick the salt, suck the lime, fuel the fire. Rrrrrrrrrrrrright on.
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Well, I seem to have pleased both Mr. Bs! LOL. You gave me the challenge and I took liberties with it! My Mr. B loved it. 🙂 🙂
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You are a natural poet, Mrs. B. Your Mr. B should love it, by the way. Duh!
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Ah, love, you whimsical, teasing, needing, yearning, burning, longing, moistening, stiffening–…
Sorry, what was I talking about? 😉
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WHOA, Guapo! Mucho caliente amor in that comment of yours! What WERE you talking about? 🙂
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Beautiful job!
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Why thank you, Señorita Nancy. It was harder to do than I thought. This is what too much time on our own without the kids does to me. 🙂 BTW, I hope you are feeling better!
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Not yet, but hoping no complications between now and the finish line. I could write a book when all is said and done.
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So sorry. 😦
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Well done, Maria . . . filled with fire and desire.
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That’s right, Nancy. You gotta keep it hot or else… 🙂
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I can’t even begin to compete with smoking piece, Maria! Great job! Make sure your recite that to the real Mr. B! xo
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Oh..yes! I think my Mr. B liked it. 🙂
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Ooooooweee!!! Sizzling! Love it!
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That’s what happens when you nest becomes empty! LOL. 🙂
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Nicely done!
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Gracias! It was more difficult than I thought to have love be in every line! 🙂
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